April 30, 2008

haiku wednesday - April 30, 2008

This week's words are
empty
highway
ignored


across seven states
your highway chatter ignored
empty of meaning

ignored on highway
empty pockets, rotted teeth
homeless hitchhiker

empty brain ignored
boss likes short skirts, large cleavage
highway to success
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17 comments:

  1. Sarah LaurensonApril 30, 2008 8:40 AM

    Nice! Especially like the homeless one.

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  2. Sarah LaurensonApril 30, 2008 8:50 AM

    Thought you might want to check out a friend of mine who's also been doing the poem a day thing this month. His name's Greg. (gottabook.blogspot.com)

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  3. AnonymousApril 30, 2008 8:55 AM

    That third one hits hard, right on spot!

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  4. Daily PanicApril 30, 2008 8:57 AM

    some bait is better than others.
    Happy 3WW!

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  5. Ello - Ellen OhApril 30, 2008 9:52 AM

    I like your haiku
    It is very cool to read
    Mine is really bad ;o)

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  6. Pirate PrincessApril 30, 2008 10:44 AM

    lol - these are great. I can't do haiku - I've tried. Alas, my brain is too wordy....

    :)

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  7. paisleyApril 30, 2008 12:37 PM

    that second one makes me sad that there has to be so much fear involved in helping someone in this world....

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  8. Tumblewords:April 30, 2008 1:23 PM

    Nice! I like the way you carried these!

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  9. Linda JacobsApril 30, 2008 1:48 PM

    All three excellent! And all conveying different ideas. I'm lucky to come up with one!

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  10. TCApril 30, 2008 4:29 PM

    The first one cracks me up. Girlfriend? Sister? Wife? Random hitchhiker? Friend? Co-worker you're forced to travel with? The possibilities are endless!

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  11. Tammy BrierlyApril 30, 2008 7:05 PM

    I liked all four of your haiku and cringed at someone babbling all through a road trip. ;)

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  12. World So WideMay 01, 2008 3:31 AM

    My kind of highway haiku!!!

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  13. AnonymousMay 01, 2008 6:44 AM

    the last haiku makes me laugh, thanks pjd

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  14. AnonymousMay 01, 2008 11:49 AM

    i can relate to all of them... the first i found absolutely hilarious b/c once in yr in the car all bets are off... how many times have i seen a person such as this a homeless hitchhiker... and the last well, geez, as an office administer we all get a kick outta this one..

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  15. UnknownMay 01, 2008 12:44 PM

    Great and a fast rhythm.

    You can find my entry here:

    http://www.laaneworld.com/2008/05/on-road.html

    Enjoy your day.

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  16. WriterKatMay 01, 2008 5:35 PM

    These are all great - some of your best. They are all true in their experience.

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  17. BoneMay 05, 2008 1:41 PM

    I needed the laugh that last one provided. Highway to success, indeed.

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