April 2, 2008

haiku wednesday - April 2, 2008

This week's words are
parallel
bounce
mysterious
note: national poetry month is April; this is my first post of the month


mysterious wink
fleshy pink parallel bounce
too-tight bikini

mysterious glitch
parallel processor died
bounce the server, dude

why did my check bounce?
we need parallel accounts
mysterious charge
at

14 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 02, 2008 1:58 PM

    I liked the second the best as i loved the way you used parallel
    Though the first was very descriptive--very
    And the third very true

    Sorry about the syllables but I think you took them as a challenge and did very very well

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  2. LucyApril 02, 2008 2:33 PM

    Wow 3 in one! great job!

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  3. AnonymousApril 02, 2008 4:07 PM

    always an enjoyable read, thanks pjd

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  4. Tumblewords:April 02, 2008 8:16 PM

    These are great - a giggle and more!

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  5. paisleyApril 02, 2008 8:21 PM

    i certainly hope you are making a compilation of all of these extremely clever haikus you dash off every wednesday!!!!

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  6. World So WideApril 02, 2008 11:08 PM

    My favorite was no. 2. Computer despair in a haiku ... great!

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  7. AnonymousApril 03, 2008 2:36 AM

    I liked them all.

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  8. TCApril 03, 2008 10:36 AM

    I'm still laughing at the 47% of your syllables... way to figure it out exactly!

    I liked the first one the best, though figure the last one resonates with too many people.

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  9. AnonymousApril 03, 2008 10:51 AM

    Lovely, insightful, and though provoking haiku.

    I wish I was disciplined enough for forms

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  10. anthonynorthApril 03, 2008 1:34 PM

    Liked them all, but the devil in me preferred the first.

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  11. AnonymousApril 03, 2008 2:41 PM

    Fun! You have a great sense of humor. Parallel accounts made me smile.

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  12. gautami tripathyApril 04, 2008 9:42 AM

    You did great with the 53%!

    parallel plot

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  13. PJDApril 04, 2008 3:13 PM

    Thanks, everyone, for stopping by and for the kind words. It is a busy time, so I felt fortunate to be able to take a little time and play this week.

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  14. WriterKatApril 06, 2008 4:19 PM

    I can relate to #2 unfortunately too often.
    Nice work on all 3.

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