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This week's words areglass
question
token
token woman, I
question board diversity
glass ceiling intact
cough up token, bitch
sit there smug in your glass cage
what's your question, sir?
question fogged-up glass
does faith need token of proof?
hazy reflection
The second one hits on the face...
ReplyDeleteI do like all three..
Loved them all (including the one on 3WW)...but the last one -- now THAT one I really get...very much!
ReplyDeleteEnjoy SF!
Each one effective, the second my fav.
ReplyDeleteWhen I first saw token, my thoughts went the very same direction yours did in your first haiku.
ReplyDeleteYup, those shake up the head, for sure! Nice work...
ReplyDeleteperfect! *all three!* I have never been good writing haikus so when I read ones that are very well done, I get unglued!*a good thing*!:o)
ReplyDeletebecause i am in a questioning mood myself today... i love the third one... although the connotation of the glass ceiling was definitely not lost on me!!
ReplyDeleteFirst it was the first, etc.
ReplyDeleteOn reflection the second was my favorite
Have a wonderful time in San Francisco
i laughed at all three.. is that bad...loved them...
ReplyDeleteevery one of them, brilliant.
ReplyDeleteI actually tried writing a haiku this week, but never could. It's not easy fitting three words into seventeen syllables sometimes.
ReplyDeleteI liked the first. It feels like discrimination against women has gotten pushed to the background in recent years.