March 19, 2008

haiku wednesday - March 19, 2008

This week's words are
money
tangled
understood


threat not understood
tangled in Iraq quagmire
blood for oil money

money presented
proposition understood
nude bodies tangled

tangled money mess
divorce lawyers confuse me
I understood love
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22 comments:

  1. anthonynorthMarch 19, 2008 8:51 AM

    I think the middle one was best. You could get hooked on that :-)

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  2. Jane DoeMarch 19, 2008 9:21 AM

    Although they are all good, I like the first one the best.

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  3. AnonymousMarch 19, 2008 9:43 AM

    Actually the third made me laugh which I need because of what you said on the first--that one was great

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  4. Tumblewords:March 19, 2008 9:57 AM

    Have to say, I have no faves - like them all!

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  5. PJDMarch 19, 2008 9:59 AM

    anthony, be careful out there... :-)

    jane, thanks for the comment. the first one is obviously in honor of the fifth anniversary.

    pia, great to see you again... though it took me a while to understand what you meant. I finally got it, but at first I thought you meant the two were somehow connected.

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  6. paisleyMarch 19, 2008 10:18 AM

    every one a gem in it's own area of expertise... that last one is a kicker!!!!

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  7. a mouthy irish woman? ridiculous!March 19, 2008 11:09 AM

    i CANNOT pick a favorite because they are all fantastic. dammit.

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  8. SherryMarch 19, 2008 11:42 AM

    All excellent -- as usual. All with different themes ... no. one very good.....

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  9. AnonymousMarch 19, 2008 12:56 PM

    We're supposed to pick a favorite? I enjoyed them all.
    Im a lover of the Haiku :)

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  10. AnonymousMarch 19, 2008 12:58 PM

    I like them all. The second one, though, stands out.

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  11. relMarch 19, 2008 5:56 PM

    pjd,
    You have the gift buddy!
    rel

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  12. AnonymousMarch 19, 2008 6:54 PM

    a serious set of haikus (is haiku plural or singular?), so much in so little space.

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  13. WriterKatMarch 19, 2008 8:40 PM

    love them! I like the 3rd best, good contrast with confuse/understood.

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  14. AnonymousMarch 20, 2008 5:22 AM

    Perfect adore them all - you're so darn clever ;)

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  15. ULMarch 20, 2008 5:58 AM

    first for me....short and to the point! blood for oil, what has the world come to?

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  16. AnonymousMarch 20, 2008 8:44 AM

    nteresting how you weave the words into three separate poems. For me, it created a cohesion between the three. You could even think about joining them somehow. It's interesting how the word money can be seen in so many contexts.

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  17. AnonymousMarch 20, 2008 8:53 AM

    I like all! They tell so much!

    arched architecture

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  18. PJDMarch 20, 2008 10:18 AM

    Thanks again for the comments, all. I really enjoyed the diversity of all your creations as well.

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  19. AnonymousMarch 20, 2008 5:07 PM

    spoken well, sometimes we lose sight of whaz really going on... enjoyed the diversity of money you spoke of...i liked em all...

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  20. BoneMarch 21, 2008 2:05 PM

    You have an ability to say a whole lot in just seventeen syllables.

    I really liked the third for its depth. Although the second--paying two girls to mudwrestle--was great, too :)

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  21. PJDMarch 21, 2008 2:50 PM

    ah, bone, mud wrestling... you're the first to mention it, but I like that interpretation best of all.

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  22. TCMarch 23, 2008 8:52 PM

    I loved the last one. :)

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