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February 27, 2008
haiku wednesday - February 28, 2008
This week's words are apology consider distant
distant nightmare screams weak corporate apology consider your soul distant stare, straight lips you consider our future apology time distant sirens howl consider turning me in no apology
Oh my gosh - I just realized there were three seperate pieces -duh!! ;) O.k. so obviously these were three different haikus, but if you consider my warped mind- I thought all three went together FANTASTICALLY as one! But you don't need to consider anything from my mind!
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Loved the second one.. superb. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeletevery nice trio....
ReplyDeleteAstute response to the prompt! Nice pieces!
ReplyDeleteNice haikus. They work well with the prompt words.
ReplyDeleteHey, hey! No asking about the Roman Numerals! They come and go... which is a good thing. (I like it best when they go.)
ReplyDeleteO:)
I liked the last one the best.
I'm lucky to have one decent thought involving these words. You have three great ones!
ReplyDeleteThere great all three, but I like the second one best.
ReplyDeleteYou can find my 3 words ::here::.
Have a great day!
I enjoy reading your haikus - well play with the 3ww words.
ReplyDeleteHow do you pick a favorite. I love all three. The second one speaks volumes. The third, so simple and perfect.
ReplyDeletesounds like a bad day in the life of sad apologies...
ReplyDeleteThis was wonderful, delightfully concise, yet heartfelt!
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh - I just realized there were three seperate pieces -duh!! ;) O.k. so obviously these were three different haikus, but if you consider my warped mind- I thought all three went together FANTASTICALLY as one! But you don't need to consider anything from my mind!
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