January 16, 2008

haiku wednesday

This week's words are
awkward
kitchen
obsessed


perfection-obsessed
she concocts in her kitchen
awkward failed taste test

obsessed stalker lurks
awkward lunge through kitchen door
kitten and sunlight

kitchen remodel
obsessed owner, lax builder
awkward schedule slip

in kitchen I weep
awkward email left on screen
she's obsessed with him
at

16 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2008 8:29 AM

    first and last for me, the first one struck close to home! Me in a nutshell! - Thanks again for sharing.

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  2. UnknownJanuary 16, 2008 8:37 AM

    I & 3 reache me the most, final one was loaded with emotion though. Great work.

    Penelope Anne
    http://wannabeawritersomeday.blogspot.com/2008/01/3ww-volume-3.html

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  3. Truefaith1963January 16, 2008 8:43 AM

    The last one is brilliant!

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2008 9:07 AM

    Never thought of haiku. I like these.

    Rose

    xo

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2008 10:29 AM

    I love that you managed to create four entirely different thoughts, yet each thoroughly satisfying, in such a spare form as haiku with these words. Wonderful! I love the kitten and sunlight one. :)

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  6. susanJanuary 16, 2008 10:39 AM

    The second one really appeals to me especially if I'm reading the stalker is the kitten correctly.

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  7. Tumblewords:January 16, 2008 1:29 PM

    Each of these so different and individually great, but still make a fine series!

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  8. SandyJanuary 16, 2008 1:55 PM

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  9. SandyJanuary 16, 2008 1:57 PM

    All great haiku using this week's prompt. My, four haiku...you make me look lazy. ha ha

    S

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  10. Linda JacobsJanuary 16, 2008 2:22 PM

    These are great! I'd be lucky just to do one! Like This Girl, I also love the kitten and sunlight one!

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  11. a mouthy irish woman? ridiculous!January 16, 2008 2:59 PM

    i'm standing up clapping! they are great! i think the last one is my favorite. :)

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  12. a mouthy irish woman? ridiculous!January 16, 2008 3:43 PM

    i think that if i have to paint? so should everyone else! or at least share in my joy!

    and you are correct--a schoosh of al la orange. not alot though. it's one of the few that didn't make my eyes bleed.

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  13. paisleyJanuary 16, 2008 6:44 PM

    who cares about cookin' when you can string words like that!!!! excellent!!!!

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  14. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2008 7:37 AM

    I liked the third one as I faced that a while back.

    Great haiku!

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  15. TCJanuary 18, 2008 6:26 AM

    Those do seem like they would be hard words to write a haiku with - oh who am I kidding?!?! I think every word would be :)

    I like the kitten one... it caught me up.

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  16. little wing writerJanuary 18, 2008 11:19 AM

    those are soooo good...words reflect crystal clear images...we can all relate im sure one time or another...of course, last one's the best, i guess b/c it is such a surprise

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