January 30, 2008

haiku wednesday - January 30, 2008

This week's words are
approach
bottle
smooth


smooth approach... hot score!
warm the baby bottle, dear
(should have used condoms)

please, stewardess, please
bring a bottle of smooth scotch
failed approach, frayed nerves

violent approach
jagged bottle, knife slash wild
smooth words turned ugly
at

22 comments:

  1. paisleyJanuary 30, 2008 9:53 AM

    ooooo progressively tougher... very nice...

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2008 10:35 AM

    Very clever word play.

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2008 11:20 AM

    Laughed at the first one. Gasped at the last.

    Rose

    xo

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  4. UnknownJanuary 30, 2008 11:28 AM

    from one to three you cover some wide serious ground....I vote for the first, because the third worries me a bit.

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  5. SherryJanuary 30, 2008 12:48 PM

    Each one of these is excellent -- each one deeper/different. I especially liked the 2nd one!!!

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2008 12:49 PM

    I think the first one is my favorite, but I liked the second as well.

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  7. Tumblewords:January 30, 2008 1:28 PM

    great selection - clear as a bell

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2008 1:52 PM

    Thought the first was cleverly funny--yes, the third did make me gasp

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  9. moonratJanuary 30, 2008 4:23 PM

    i love the calvin & hobbes frame you have in the corner. it really speaks to my people.

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  10. Robin S.January 30, 2008 4:50 PM

    Hi!

    I have now officially come by to say, um, hi!

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2008 5:34 PM

    I like how each viewpoint is different.

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  12. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2008 6:55 PM

    I like this modern take on the haiku. What if these three were connected, on an airplane!

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  13. PJDJanuary 30, 2008 8:00 PM

    Thank you all for visiting and commenting! I try to visit the sites of all those who comment (except robin of course since she has none).

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  14. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2008 8:27 PM

    You certainly created stories with each one, like them all.

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  15. ULJanuary 30, 2008 8:32 PM

    this is fun, fun! I couldnt stop the laughter on the first...

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  16. ShopgirlJanuary 30, 2008 11:59 PM

    I love the first one! :)

    And my fave lines in my 3WW this week are the same as yours :)

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  17. AnonymousJanuary 31, 2008 3:51 AM

    All contain stories. Thanks! I loved the first one!

    bag and baggage

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  18. little wing writerJanuary 31, 2008 2:04 PM

    those three are great..three different worlds of emotions...

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  19. AnonymousJanuary 31, 2008 6:21 PM

    LOL then ouch! It seems the bottle tends to owies.

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  20. lissaJanuary 31, 2008 6:54 PM

    lots of emotions, lots to ponder over

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  21. WriterKatJanuary 31, 2008 8:54 PM

    Nice job. The first is a keeper!

    BTW, have you ever heard of the book "Office Haiku"? Some really funny corporate poetry you might enjoy.

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  22. TCFebruary 03, 2008 9:07 PM

    I laughed so hard at the first one. Wonder just how many people have that very thought progress in the history of life? :)

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